Bad opening
That initial thumping opener? It sounds like someone banging your skull in with a hammer. Once the rest of the music joins it becomes more bareable but that intitial few seconds is not enjoyable and will make people not listen to the rest.
What a coincidence, the first 30 seconds were supposed to give the visual of being hit in the head by a hammer. Obviously I have succeeded.
Highly enjoyable
The light tone of the music makes the content that much more amusing to listen to. I love the quality of your work in this too, but i think the underlying beat has one glaring flaw.
Take out the lyrics. Lock yourself in a room and play the lyricless music on a permanent loop. It's one of those beats that could drive a man insane.
yes i know =D satan gave me the formula to insanity and it turned out to be the score for a wonderful song =D thanks for listening chicken! BRAAK!
Perpetually lazy and demotivated. Thrust something my way and i'll probably do it, with minimal effort.
Age 35, Male
Unemployed
York, England
Joined on 9/18/03
Generic Crappy Dance Song