Idocreating's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Radiation Poisoning]

Ouch

Very informative flash. Though i believe it's all bullshit, what about superpowers? Don't they come from radiation?

You could have put a joke one in the end like 50 sv = Flight abilities and 100sv = laser eye beams.

But i guess that would have destroyed the serious message thing.

[Phoenix Wright: Liar Liar]

Could be better.

I love that sound clip, Liar Liar was a good choice for Phoenix Wright, but it's iffy in places.

Sometimes the sound changes quality in places, as if it's from different sources. Use one big sound file thats all of the same quality sound so it doesn't change. Other than that the clip used is very good.

Unfortunatly the sync STILL isn't quite right and even worse, it's poorly done in many places. Phoenix can do many actions and you haven't used some where they could have been, it doesn't look as smooth or as fluent as it could be.

Try patching it up and resubmitting it if it doesn't pass, this is ok but not great. And keep the window size to the DS window size, like AshfordPride's flashes.

[Snow to Surf]

Wow

That is one awesome framerate. Shame about the music being out os sync though.

[Random shorts 7]

Oh man

I have never seen anyone make burping so funny.

Golden gem of NG.

[Anim 340 Midterm]

Very Wierd

But i love this. I don't know why but i think it's like a cute short animation.

But more violent. No plot needed nore wanted. Good show.

[The Mighty Trio 1.3]

Good

Nice Frame by Frame animation, very good sound quality (gotta tell me how to get rid of all the breathy sounds from speech)

Oh yeh i forgot, i have this!

Although we knew it was coming the line was still great.

Ghosty22 responds:

I was actually worried that my sound wasn't that good. I've been having microphone problems lately. As far as avoiding breath in your recordings, sometimes it's good enough to hold the mic a little farther away...

Sometimes it helps to not talk directly into the mic, but talk above it so that the stream of air coming out of your mouth passes over the top of the mic, rather than hitting it...

Also, I find that when I'm doing characters, I tend to talk more forcefully. Altering your breath often makes you breathe harder, because you have to work to force air through your clenched vocals chords... It might be helpful to try your lines first with your hands in front of your mouth so you can gage how much air is coming out. Those are the best suggestions I can come up with...

It might also be helpful to know that it took me several takes to get them right. Don't be afraid to reject your bad takes...